I’m always interested in finding ways to make my writing more POWERFUL.
Today I read through my notebook and came across this quote:
The adjective is the enemy of the noun. – Voltaire
I remember exploding the first time I read this quote. So true!
Let’s say I’m describing a sneaky, immoral doctor. I could hem and haw and try to get the reader to see what I’m trying to say,
or I could use the perfect noun and get my message across more directly:
Weak: He was a sneaky, immoral doctor.
Strong: He was a charlatan.
Bam. Done. Message conveyed. Time to get on with my story.
So for today’s post, I’m letting Voltaire’s quote inspire me to ‘power write.’
Here are 6 ways to achieve this.
1. Expunge every adjective and adverb from your writing.
Instead, utilize perfect nouns and verbs.
2. Never begin a sentence with “There was.”
Weak: There was a knock at the door.
Strong: A man knocked at the door.
3. When choosing a tense, think: simple.
Weak: He had spoken. He has spoken. He was speaking. He would have liked to have spoken.
Strong: He spoke.
4. Use the active voice.
Weak: She was always brought to tears by the first snow of the season. (Passive)
Strong: She cried during the first snow of the season. (Active)
5. Use positive actions. (Say what happened instead of what didn’t happen.)
Weak: The child did not enjoy going to the museum.
Strong: The child detested going to the museum.
6. Avoid clauses using the –ing construction.
Weak: Removing her mask, she turned to face him.
Strong: She removed her mask and faced him.
7. Do not use clichés. At all. Ever.
(Exception to this rule: You may use a cliché if you change it slightly. This is an attention-grabber.)
Weak: He took the newcomer under his wing.
Strong: He buried the newcomer under his wing.
Write these 7 suggestions on a Post-it note to hang above your desk. Whenever you are editing your writing, use it as a check list to pump up the power!